Tyguy80s's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chutneys Horrible Deformity]

He's an inflatable beach ball now.

ChutneyGlaze responds:

Jeez Ty why are you so insensitive? Chutney is in a lot of pain because of his reverse chest hump cant you see?!

[Frog in a Thunderstorm]

I'm hopping with joy right now.

ChutneyGlaze responds:

Ha, I knew you would!

[bath.]

Skinny dipping... actually I have no witty joke for this one. The subject's surrounded by roses, I take it she's a flower? I haven't a clue, but it definitely seems you've gone for what you were going for. Good work here Dico.

DicoBurdova responds:

thank you! ^^ funny, you're not the only one who interpreted it that way, i definitely like the idea! thank you for commenting!

[A realistic eye ball]

Progress is being made here. The bottom half of the eye could be smoother. Maybe make the white sparkle balls transparent... Also, arteries encircle the entire eyeball, and they amass from behind it. Not to mention you totally forgot the tear duct. Check an anatomical graph next time you want to be realistic.

CALIFLOWER responds:

Thanks for the tip dude :)

[DAN AND TOM trailer 2]

The key point to not getting blammed. Seriously, take note.

1.) Don't say "please don't blam". That's reverse psychology and the viewer will want to blam.

2.) If you're going with the black and white art style that's okay but then make sure your character movements are fine. If you haven't already, read "The Animator's Survival Guide". Big helpful hints on how to get movements looking accurate. You seem to have a good idea on how frame-by-frame works based on your gifs.

3.) You'll get better reception if you use a color scheme. I saw your anime eyes, so I know you know how to color and shade roughly. Doesn't have to be complicated but a tidy background that's colored fine should do well even if the characters are simple black and white stick-men. Consider the room's light source and where the shadows would drop.

4.) Put in love. Take your time. Add music (I recommend my track "Anew"; it's on my NG page), a preloader, sound effects if desired. It's a ten second cartoon so please make it beautiful. 10 sec. cartoons are normally an automatic blam in NG community. I know you can do it CALIFLOWER. It'll totally be worth it!

Side note I helped make this so if it's not beautiful I'll cry... a lot XD

CALIFLOWER responds:

Those are beautiful words

[Digital Portrait]

and if you get less than an A on that exam, just show this to your professor and I'm sure they'll understand ;)

DicoBurdova responds:

Just finished it and it went alright I think haha, 1 done, 9 more to go! I can do this ! ;)

[Iceburg of My Life]

Fine work here. It's definitely a good self expression. I understand, I was in high school and simultaneously balancing extra-curriculars and academics is tough. On top of all that, you draw nicely too! A real renaissance lady aren't you? Newgrounds is a very encouraging of art and sharing so feel free to post here anytime if that's what you enjoy doing. Practice what you enjoy and be persistent in achieving your goals, it's totally worth it.

Chimpanic543723 responds:

Thank You!

[Jellyfish]

Oooo don't touch it! It might sting!

DicoBurdova responds:

haha XP

[Golden Whale]

This is spectacular. Really, it's imaginitve, creative, and it's a broader concept. There's still a girl there, so it's definitely Dico enough :) You must've had a "whale" of a good time :D

Seriously, the colour palatte is suiting and the amount of detail is just right for your art style. Good work here.

DicoBurdova responds:

That's so nice! Thank you Tyler ;)

[Flippy]

Yippee! a Flippy! You must be newer to cartooning; see my first ever flash cartoons they were god awful. Newgrounds is glad you've found the lovely en-devour and potential lifelong enjoyment that is art. Continue to hone your craft if that's what you wish to do.

JamesCubeNG responds:

Thanks! Yeah, I'm pretty new. I'm hoping to keep this up and stay.