Didn't make me laugh real hard, but I'm sure this comedy appeals to some audience. This is definitely more creative than a majority of what you'll find on this site. Thanks for sharing!
Didn't make me laugh real hard, but I'm sure this comedy appeals to some audience. This is definitely more creative than a majority of what you'll find on this site. Thanks for sharing!
Thanks for watching and commenting Tyguy80s.
Ha, that Finn reference at 1:35. Personally, if the art style was more realstic and detailed, I would've enjoyed this more. Thanks for sharing, this was a good short film.
thanks man, appreciate that
Getting there, a little better. jearle219's a WAY better voice for this show then I'll ever hope to be. I do need to agree with Wondemeow though, perhaps you should spend some time just making some practice animations not for sharing but to improve upon your skills. Try upping the frame rate. Typically, 30fps is a generally used frame rate, Eddsworld and the look of Johnny Quest seemed to used more like 21-27fps. Bumping up the frame rate will do wonders.
Seriously, lots of helpful animation tutorials here on NG and "The Animator's Survival Kit". Keep practicing.
Your right....
This cartoon shows much improvement from previous animations. Nicely done. However, the timing of the animations is a little off sync, the mouth movements in particular near the end. Also, it seems weird that in a comedy cartoon when Dan says get off me that Tom's not touching him. Nonetheless, you're getting better at this and it'll improve further with practice. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for the tip
I was in a rush animating I think...
Fine cartoon character you did here. Personally, I think his mouth is awkwardly placed. Is he a singer that tilted his mouth to the side? Good illustration nonetheless but that's my only qualm. is the mouth placement.
Thank you, but I just do my mouths like that due to my anime-like style. Thank you for your feedback!
This is great work given the software you chose. Ha, meme at the end. Good work on keeping the proportions of the characters and choice of brushstrokes. Thanks for sharing and am looking forward to seeing more in the future.
Thank you so much!!
Perhaps some music would've made this even better. This is good humor and sounds exactly like a conspirator that I've had the displeasure of meeting in my life.
Yeah good call on the music, I think I might try something synced to music next. I think everyone knows one.
Ha, an alliteration. Short, but worth a giggle. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for watching!
I used to animate flash cartoons as a teen, but now I compose contemporary orchestral and classical music. Instruments I Play Guitar, Ukulele, and Clarinet/Bass Clarinet.
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