Nicely done. The plot twist was cliche and cheesy my taste, but your art and animation style is unique; cool and good. Good work.
Nicely done. The plot twist was cliche and cheesy my taste, but your art and animation style is unique; cool and good. Good work.
Thanks. Appreciate the feedback. Sorry, you found the plot twist cliche and cheesy. I guess the old "enemy getting the upper hand, fall in the spikes" trope is a little over used, ain't it?
I love me some Pivot animations. This was well done and seems to tell the story you wanted to tell, thanks for sharing.
MUCHO CORRER! Yo habla espanol mui pequino... yo bada hablano no bueno espanol :) Quality frame-by-frame animation, es mui comica ajo gets sliced at the end. Es bueno pelicula.
I see there's a moral of story. Seems more like a comic book, you should leave buttons to go to the next scene/keyframe instead of giving a timer. I chose fast reader and as was staring at the screen next time. It's hard to enjoy without music or some sort of ambient noise or sound effects. It's a fine story, but I had to give up right before the big sword fight because I found this boring.
You should keep practicing for sure. This flash'd be better if it had page flips instead of a timer. The action-script is simple too, if I remember it's something like "stop();" and the page flip buttons like movie-clips and that's "gotoandPlay(frame number of scene here);"
Thank you for the amazingly encouraging rating that totally backs up your words.
In order to collab on newgrounds I need first a project published :D Next one might have music, etc. Maybe.
The slapstick comedy was well executed. There's inspiration from older cartoons and I'm loving that vibe. If you did well animated flash games they'd be a hit. The animation is fluid; you're well practiced. Thanks for sharing this is quality work.
Good for you on taking up animation! I can see the inspiration for the plot. There's a game shop far from me and it was always fun to come back home with a cool new game. It's your animation, but I'd suggest subtitles instead of speech bubbles if you want people to be able to read what they're saying.
The effort can be seen. Keep practicing, you'll get better! Also, what song are you using? Do you have the artist's permission to use the music?
Thank you so much! The song is Daft Punk - Digital Love (Instrumental)
That was dark. Animation was nicely done too. I personally don't like dark Disney fiction, but this was well put together, so that's why 3.5 stars.
Yeah, the dark Disney stuff is pretty cliche, but I don't know, I just felt like making it. Thanks.
Definitely underwhelming. It's apparent that Egoraptor never wanted to make a real Metal Gear Awesome 3 since he became a Grump. This was more or less to appease some of us NG veterans that like a quick giggle. It's still a work of art so I appreciate it but I feel teased more than anything.
ROFL but yet disturbing
Some of this was really kinda creepy yet I couldn't resit laughing. some of the images were probably the only why I find this this funny. Overall this was enjoyably :)
I used to animate flash cartoons as a teen, but now I compose contemporary orchestral and classical music. Instruments I Play Guitar, Ukulele, and Clarinet/Bass Clarinet.
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