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Make sure to credit the music somewhere, either in the credits or the author comments. Animations quality's fine. A clever use of sound effects will either make or break this series, please don't blast music over all the death scenes in the real series. That'd be shouting "amateur Newgrounder" and would not be fun to watch. This is something I'd actually look forward too; I've seen the Darwin Award movie the Metallica concert scene was my favorite part of all of it :)

Thanks for sharing :)

Seems like you achieved the art style you're going for. Perhaps "Sorry about short animation, got lazy." isn't the best thing to leave in the author comments; it sets more biased viewers in the down-voting mindset. For some reason, this cartoon didn't strike me as much as it probably should've. because I like memes and I loved Skyrim and the post-90s Fallout series.

Good effort despite the briefness. Thanks for sharing.

Mossball is adorbs :P Thanks for sharing. Say, if this is your original track you should totally upload it to the audio portal and credit it here on the page. That way, if anybody particularly liked the track they'd be able to listen to it, maybe download, maybe use it in their own cartoon.

The animation quality's okay, but the movie itself is rather lame. Rules of the flash portal state that movies under 10sec. are not allowed unless it's exceptionally beautiful. The cost of bandwidth for a page with a large file is high, and that file containing little appreciable content is a poor use of bandwidth.

Your animation skill is okay, but the movie's, although prepared nicely, short and somewhat boring. Keep practicing, I'm sure you'll create some cool stuff in the future.

Getting there, a little better. jearle219's a WAY better voice for this show then I'll ever hope to be. I do need to agree with Wondemeow though, perhaps you should spend some time just making some practice animations not for sharing but to improve upon your skills. Try upping the frame rate. Typically, 30fps is a generally used frame rate, Eddsworld and the look of Johnny Quest seemed to used more like 21-27fps. Bumping up the frame rate will do wonders.

Seriously, lots of helpful animation tutorials here on NG and "The Animator's Survival Kit". Keep practicing.

CaliflowerAnimations responds:

Your right....

Understanding this is your older work. The car flying through the air's unrealistic but overall I'd rate this cartoon as "s'alright". Perhaps uploading your old stuff long after you've improved isn't the grandest plan but that my personal opinion. Thanks for sharing.

This cartoon shows much improvement from previous animations. Nicely done. However, the timing of the animations is a little off sync, the mouth movements in particular near the end. Also, it seems weird that in a comedy cartoon when Dan says get off me that Tom's not touching him. Nonetheless, you're getting better at this and it'll improve further with practice. Thanks for sharing.

CaliflowerAnimations responds:

Thank you for the tip
I was in a rush animating I think...

Fender flux, Gender fluid, Pansaxual... I didn't think other terms existed. I really would've preferred this be animated, and not so much the "pseudo comic book" or animatic feel to it. The style of humour's accomplished well here and overall this is enjoyable. Thanks for sharing.

You really should have a credits screen. Otherwise this is a quality cartoon. Thanks for sharing.

Fine cartoon character you did here. Personally, I think his mouth is awkwardly placed. Is he a singer that tilted his mouth to the side? Good illustration nonetheless but that's my only qualm. is the mouth placement.

MitsuHarp responds:

Thank you, but I just do my mouths like that due to my anime-like style. Thank you for your feedback!

I used to animate flash cartoons as a teen, but now I compose contemporary orchestral and classical music. Instruments I Play Guitar, Ukulele, and Clarinet/Bass Clarinet.

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