Tyguy80s's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alien Plasma Rifle Concept Animation V1]

Normally, test/practice animations are a no-go for the portal, but this is exceptional. Fine use of motion tweens and it's carefully designed. Since it's just a concept and not a full-fledged movie, I'll only give this a three. Great work for what it is. Thanks for sharing.

Bobblehob responds:

Thank you! My animations so far have all been in a similar format to this. I have a couple others, one of which I also uploaded today, and one which I will be uploading tomorrow once the submission timer resets. Is there a place on the portal here which would be suited to shorter animations like mine?

[Crystal speed drawing]

Speed drawings are almost always fun to watch. I feel it might fare even better on YouTube. As far as the video and the art work, I feel some music'd help make this video more fun. Feel free to browse NG's audio portal for some great royalty free music. Feel free to use my music ;)

I think the character's color scheme's overly-simplistic, but those are my tastes. I feel an X-Men vibe, like Storm and Mystique. Great effort, thanks for sharing. Put some music in though it'll make this more enjoyable to watch!

SarlechFROST responds:

Thank you so much for your feedback. I had music in the full video but i didn't think many would want to hear it. Regardless thanks for the feed back. I'm new on newgrounds so having had my first critique feels good.

[Kart]

Ha, all just a elaborate setup for a meme :) Good work here. Personally, the art style could use some practice, but the overall quality was good. A stick man though, after going through the trouble of animating two beings just to underscore with a green stick-man... maybe it's my sense of humor here, who know's? Keep practicing and thanks for sharing I liked this.

[axe1]

Animation quality's okay, but the Flash Portal isn't the place for four second loops/practice animations. Read your profile, glad that you have a WACOM Intuos that's a great tablet, but you'll need to make lengthier flash in order for it to pass the judgement system.

[Two and a half Kens]

A lot of effort was clearly put into this but really, you just ripped off that episode of Family Guy. This movie made me cringe. I'm sure you'll make cool stuff in the future though, keep practicing you'll get there.

[The Foreversphere]

Zach Liberman should get an account and get some credit for this. Great content and loved your music and it's use. A little Newgrounds culture thing; we really appreciate seeing things submitted by the animator/artist themselves and getting to know them. Also, consider adding some sample tunes onto the Audio portal if you want, you;ll totally gain a following for your music here. Thanks for sharing.

MickeyWilsonSFX responds:

Thanks again, Zach has now been added to the Credits & Info spot!

[My School Stories]

Don't be afraid to scream into the microphone at 0:20 in the video. I'm sure you're parents'd understand if you just told them you're making a video, then just plug up your bedroom door with a towel/blanket, than stand a good distance away from the mic and belt. This is a good cartoon. Keep practicing, and hope you make more cool stuff in the future.

[Moves like Paper]

The cartoon was enjoyable and fun. You need to be careful using copyrighted material.

[The Sergio Show Episode #79]

Everyone's got their art style, but I really wish you'd improve Sergio's mouth shapes. Basic "a-e-i-o-u" mouth shapes... Nothing wrong with having a style if this is what you truly enjoy but every single episode looks like it was made in 2003. Ignore what I'm about to say if you truly believe in your work; it's seems you could stand for some art and animation lessons. I recommend "The Animator's Survival Kit".

You make work because you enjoy it and you share for those who care to watch. That's fine and dandy. Maybe you realize the things that could really use improving in your cartoons. Personally, I can't stand them not necessarily because of the plot or voice acting, but because your art looks so elementary and it makes me cringe.

I don't know the exact limitations of TOON BOOM software, but every video's pixelated. You could probably do better than this. Keep practicing. Thanks for reading.

TheSergioShow responds:

Hey, first I have the book you're talking about and the show improves by Episode 101 and onward! Thanks for letting me know and Have An Animated Day!

[The Ultimate Showdown]

A timeless classic. Loved it as a kid, and love now as a twenty-something. This was a true work of art for it's time period. To think this was was just an amateur drawing and seeing not much in terms of people's response. Thank you whoever uploaded this if you're reading. You're officially the creator of something worth remembering.